Friday 8 February 2013

Week 5

The Dark Day

We're all dressed in black
And its pouring down rain.
My mom is sobbing in the back
We're all going insane.

How could this happen?
Nobody knows what to do
Yesterday he was talking 
But today he just didn't come to.

We all knew there wasn't much time
Though we wished the doctors lied
But we didn't expect it to be this soon
Today my Grandfather died.

The poem "The Dark Day" is 12 lines, 3 stanzas with the rhyme scheme abcb. The speaker uses the form and rhyme scheme of this poem to contribute to the tone of the poem which is sad and serious. The speaker wrote this poem from her memories of the day her grandfather died, while she was on the way to the hospital. The content of the "The Dark Day" such as "We're all dressed in black and it's pouring down rain" contributes to the very serious and sad tone of this poem.





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